Reviews For Lesser Species
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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2020 8:45 PM Title: Slime

Cant believe I havent read this before such great scenarios. Humans being so small that even fairies tower beyond them. The slime chapter was my facvorite seeing Glau slowly get bigger and bigger till she got to her mature size was fantastic, trying to imaginge how thicc she was at the end. Glau being chilldish and getting more mature while she reformed was a great touch that she stopped even acknowledging the tiny humans.

Great work time to read your other stories.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed these. The slime one was fun to write (thought it took lot or rewrites until I got satisfied with the slowly maturing part)!

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 24 2020 8:35 AM Title: Slime

Nice to see you continuing this story. The slime idea was clever.

I do think it would be nice to see an interaction with the humans that doesn't involve destroying their city. Still showcasing how puny they really are of course.



Author's Response:

There'll be something nondestructive in a future chapter, yes.

Reviewer: Trap Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2020 3:55 PM Title: Slime

Oh gosh, it returns!

I'm amazed at the pace it builds up, with the consciousness and scale both becoming less connected to the humans with time. The sheer scope you led up to while keeping everything in perspective was great. Looks like humanity doesn't have much chance against anything here!

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