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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful start, cannot wait to see how his mother and sister destroy the world. I can't help but imagine Carly at this size too :P



Author's Response:

Some (but probably not all) of what happens in this story would be envied by Carly

Reviewer: Mazarino Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing beginning

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: SuperD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

A great start. I cannot wait to see where it goes, you have my complete attention.



Author's Response:

Thanks! It'll only ramp up from here

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

So it kinda like an unaware story?



Author's Response:

Eh yes and no. Call it a hybrid.

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2017 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what the girls will do once they realize it is real. Can't wait for more! 

 

Still can't wait for Carly from blackmail be huge!



Author's Response:

Thanks. More is coming soon.

Blackmail 6 will definitely still happen someday and let Carly on the loose.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2017 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

So how do Nicole and Brandy feel about their son/brother?



Author's Response:

If they knew where he was, they'd probably pause to makes sure he was safe. But they're also pretty darn tall.

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