[Report This]Date: October 14 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
You don't see too many good old-fashioned rampage stories floating around anymore. Loving this one :)
Author's Response:
The classics are classics for a reason I always say - glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Date: October 13 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12: Traffic Jam
“'Come on… come on!!!'Muhammad screamed at no one in particular in his Middle Eastern accent"
Seriously?
Author's Response:
Seriously! Thanks for reading!
Date: October 13 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
I like how you show how the random civilians perceive her, their fears and all. Having said that, I hope you don't overdo it or it might dilute the plot too much. I really want to see how Tasha deals with the 3 men in her life. Raymond is included in the list.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback ;)
Date: October 09 2017 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Fantastic <3
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: October 07 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Mounting a Defense
Great story so far. Love the mad scientist guy who gave Tasha her growth (love Tasha more though)
Author's Response:
And i love seeing the crazed lunatic get some appreciation every once and awhile! ;) Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: October 03 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Growing Appetite
Love Tasha. Crush those insects.
Author's Response:
Oh crush she will! :)
Date: October 03 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tasha Grows
Fabulous story. Very good setup.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: October 03 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
I cannot wait to see how Tasha interacts with her ex and Steve! Love this story!
Author's Response:
Your wait will soon be over! :) Glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: October 02 2017 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 9: Escape plan
So curious to see what could happens if she finds her abusive ex-boyfriend. Especially if it takes some time and she grows even bigger and more powerful.
Or gentle Steve. She thought many times about fleeing from everything and going with him. Guess now after continuously ascending into goddesshood she can simply claim him.
I think what I liked most is that she is embracing her size and power. Not shy or afraid of it. After being beaten, used and subdued for some time; or a lot of time; must be truly free, empowering and arousing to be able to do anything now.
Author's Response:
Her reunion with Don is quite close now... stay tuned! :)
Date: October 02 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
xcellent. The caliber of story that keeps me coming back after months of finding only poorly written, exclusively smutty or listless stories. You have quite the aptitude for character development and imagery. I am there in your story, observing the action and invested in the emotions of your characters. Exceptional, a rose among thorns.
I'm hoping that you can muster the strength to finish this story with the brilliance you started with. Please don't let this story spiral into a crash as most of the good ones on this site seem to.
The direction you are going with Tasha is exciting, I love her transformation from a beautiful, innocent victim into a terrifying, maniacal goddess. The relationship between her and Steve is also well developed (and I'm secretely hoping for a tragic, twisted, evil and sacrificial end to that romance, but this is your tale).
My only suggestion (and it is only a suggestion, nothing more), is that you take a little more time to develop the fear of the victims. I feel every other emotion the characters experience, and if you just spent a little more time developing their fear, this story would be perfect.
But again, I'm not writing this to criticize. I am writing this to inspire you to continue. Thank you for what you have given us so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you - I appreciate the feedback! I've got quite a bit more already written, which will be posted once I find time to edit. And still working on finishing it up, but glad you're enjoying it so far! :)
Date: September 29 2017 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
LikeD especially the ending, and hope for more..... SOON ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! More is one the way :)
[Report This]Date: September 28 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 6: First Steps
Loved the setup. The ension building. Can't wait to see how much further she and everyone else will react to this inimaginable size and power.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it so far - much more to come! :)
Date: September 27 2017 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Must...have...mooooore! XD
Author's Response:
Coming soon, glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Loving it so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)