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Reviewer: Samuel Orona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Enticing first chapter, I see you love women in uniforms much as I do! I'm trying to only write stories with characters over 18, if you want you can read the first chapter of my new story "Season of the Comet"

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you liked the other eight chapters, as well. :-) And, yes, I did enjoy the first chapter of your sci-fi story. Which is why I'm looking forward to the second one! In the meantime, why not partake of "Invasion Of The Baton Twirlers From Outer Space" (v. 1)?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

"Every One Here (Step To The Rear)"
by Elmer Bernstein and Carolyn Leigh. Copyright 1967.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Okay...a little lost here.  I mean, I know there was a Lizzy Maguire show...I guess I don’t watch enough TV.  You tots out Deadpooled me.  But Disney channel...that’s cheating.

But if you’re gonna talk about shrinking this Lizzy chick...I want some tiny Lizzy ....or something dammit. 

Anyway, has kind of an interlude feel to it.  The interactions were pretty weak, though there is something to be said for the impersonal talk-about-the-tiny-like-his-opinion-doesn’t-matter thing.  So there is that. 

Kinda wondering what Wanda has planned.  What is the moral of this story?  Or is there one?  Maybe it has an immoral. 



PS...Duh or out for those Disney guys...scary.

Author's Response: LIZZY MAGUIRE was Disney Channel's answer to Melissa Joan Hart's CLARISSA EXPLAINS IT ALL...and Hilary Duff's first big claim to fame. Each week, Disney Channel saw her dealing with one (only slightly exaggerated) travail of pre-teen angst after another. With 4th Wall-breaking commentary provided by her animated subconscious alter-ego. While HISTK THE MOVIE not only spawned two feature-length sequels. It also led to a syndicated two-season TV spin-off with Peter Scolari taking over as Wayne Zalinski! But, I have to be honest; I dislike the gradually increasing trend towards underage giantesses in the stories, here. So, if I was going to do a Disney crossover pastiche, for real, I'd set it in senior year of high school or freshman year of college. And, I'd probably be reverting to PG-level interactions, at that! Hence, it'll be sometime before I attempt that pastiche for real.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 7


My imaginary lawyer, Isidore "Izzy" Serious, has reminded me that it's mandatory to remind you guys that I neither own nor profit from the Disney characters mentioned in these last two chapters. Personally, however, I think that falls in the "No! Duh!" category.

Don't you?

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2017 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 I was feeling sorry for you and posted a review...of a story that was really about not getting enough reviews?  Suckered.

No really...pretty awesomely funny.  Great meta-parody-deconstruction type stuff.  Needs a little more Deadpool, though. 

Really, though, it seems like you’re having a good time.  And if you’re having a good time, your audience should be too...




PS...i wanna see that Jack the Ripper thing...if it's got SW.

Author's Response: Lo1! Nahhhhh! I just recycled the _first_ chapter of an earlier story that I ultimately had to delete due to an erosion-proof case of writer's block.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hi Carycomic.

I couldn’t stand to see your story go by with so few reviews.  I’m always happy to see our genre used as a venue for comedy and fun.  And you are bringing it, big time.

You might be suffering from a lack of a main giantess for your audience to engage with.  Though, from a certain stand point, there is...they’re all Wanda.  Yes, I know it’s her.  So, there you go audience, Wanda is your fun giantess of many faces.  Now give the man some reviews.

See? I get yer back, buddy.

Thanks for sharing this.  Fun story, have fun writing it and showing off your comedy skills.



Author's Response: Thanks, dude! And, yeah, the Revisionary is Wanda's avatar. Even Nigel Bruce--Basil Rathbone's Dr. Watson--would've been able to deduce that! :-) Rest assured, though, that there are more subtle plot twists still ahead. ;-D

Reviewer: littless Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Kind of an elaborate beginning. But other than that, I'm liking it.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! I was beginning to think I'd have another deletion on my hands.

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