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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 hallway to hell, stairway to heaven.

Close call! Im dying for the action but I like how you put it off with the opening he had to escape during his sister confusion. 

Whatever editing difficulties you had seem to have been worked out. Story was fine when I read it. 

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