First thing first... I love your story ! It's one of my favourite, with GH-X2. I just like NWO stories which go out of their way to truly flesh out a world (especially non-post apocalypse ones).

Now, time to dive into what I want to say concerning the world and then the characters.

1. I can't help but feel that the MAJORS are the result of a super-soldier experiment gone wrong. First because of the Dark Age mystery. If Mei can go out saying that minors evolved through the centuries because they were hunted down, the inability of the MAJORS to even talk about the Dark Age is quite suspect. Furthermore, their abilities (size, strength, low-level psionic powers) and behaviour (highly competitive, prone to resort to violence) really scream "super-weapons" for me. I wouldn't be surprised to learn that if minor were not exterminated proper, it was because some MAJOR leader discovered that, when bonded, minors had the ability to "tame" MAJORS, because so far, the bonded giants seems far calmer and less prone to violence.

2.Excepting the most vile, the Winton and Titzilla for the most part (but also Gloria to some extent, for her sneaky and underhanded behaviour), I find all the other MAJORS to be potentially good for Izzy's personal growth. The poor girl was in a bad position : too sheltered to truly understand her world, too independant to fit into the mold that minor are expected to be, which saddens me because she should have been better prepared. Then again, it's already hard to educate children in our world, so I won't judge her father in hers.

So far, if Izzy has to bond with someone at least for a time to truly learn what it is and be able to go above that, Mei is really my favourite. While she uses her abilities to gauge Izzy, and all MAJORS do the same really, she is the most respectful of her. I don't think she's Endgame, but I really think that both Izzy and her could only grow as characters if they were togethor for a time. Mabel's sister is also a strong contender, if only because I want to learn more about Tier 3 and the feedback her and Izzy now have.

Bonus : if (when?) other independant minor characters are introduced, I expect to see a lot of tensions from the MAJORS. Especially if Izzy and one of the newcomers beging to be attracted to each others. The dynamic of the story will become even more complew, and I like it.

Overall... Keep going strong !

I waited to toss a review after reading the first couple of chapters since I saw you reusing the sisters and freinds for an alternate style story. at first I thought it was.. kinda lazy? but I have to admit, it has turned out more interesting then I initially thought. I enjoy your writing style so I couldn't put it down either way, so I had to read it lol

As for my thoughts, I find the dynamic between characters to be good really. They all have different opinions and circumstances and the relationship between sabrina and izzy doesn't feel super strange to me in this one like before. The bonding has me curious as well, but i'm getting a gist from the latest chapter of what to expect perhaps, so i'll wait and see!

So far, it's been a good dang read. Izzy isn't as hopeless in this story, still a strong character and such while the other characers all feel unique as well so far. 

I do have ONE question though.. Noticed a lack of description in the last chapter and was really curious. When she put izzy on her shoulders... was she facing forward or backwards... I MUST KNOW!!

I DEMAND YOU TAKE PART THREE OF THIS STORY DOWN RIGHT NOW

and post it again in a month. Seriously, NotSirk posting so often must mess up some kind of world balance somewhere.

Thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see whats coming next. Please keep on writing ;)

Good lord, you are a machine and an inpsiration.

Neat world.  I'd love to see what Izzy's history with Majors are.  It almost feels like she's been living in isolation, like she knows about Majors but isn't accustomed to them.

This reminds me a bit of Izzy's fantasy world in SMALL, where she has a romance with her Amazonian heroine Sabrina.

     Oh, I like Izzy.  To heck with a bunch of biggies who think they’re better than her.  Good on you tiny heroine!

     I have to say, that stories where the whole world is entitled to abuse a tiny tend to fall short in my anything but humble opinion.  The big characters lack...character if they have no challenges in their relationship with tinies.  If they face no consequences for anything they do, then they don’t have to risk or earn anything.  And there are hints that this is that kind of world.  Thus my sympathies go straight to the tiny and everything the biggies do winds up being a pretty much pointless bunch of bullying. 

    I also am afraid that we’re going to see dad become one of those guys who are all too common in these stories....he spends 17 years loving and supporting and empowering his daughter, then a sexy woman shows up and he turns feckless.  Kind of feels cheap when that happens. 
     Of course you’ve also set up a scenario where he exhibits character and trusts and supports his daughter, even though her decisions my cost him said sexy woman. 
    I have a feeling the outcome may be somewhere inbetween. 

   Izzy seems like a rich and compelling protagonist and I really would like to see more of her.   I am curious to see how this world treats her.  If the world will earn her resentment and all it will amount to is a lot of impotent rage on her part, or if the world is humane enough to provide some mechanism for her to seek some justice. 

Thank you for inspiring my curiosity and good luck in your writing.

Peace

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Hmmm, this seems interesting, can't wait to see how things progress from here.