[Report This]Date: November 04 2018 3:26 PM Title: Shannon in the place - part 1
Awesome chapter! I really hoped we would see Shannon and Alejandro on the bond plane.
I think both of them really need this. Shannon needs to learn to let somebody else to take control sometimes and Alejandro needs to see how awesome he actually is.
Oh and it was also good fun to see Shannon stomping around.
Thank you for writing and I hope you had a nice break.
Author's Response:
Glad that you're liking it !
Shannon's the ultimate MAJOR : bigger, badder, stronger... and it means she gets to rule everyone. And sadly for her and her tyrannic tendencies, she has fallen in love, with a traumatized Minor who needs more care to be handled and open himself than she has ever believed existed in the world (since MAJORS are pretty unimaginative - at least, that's my take on it- when it comes to non-pragmatic/functional thinking). Letting go of her dominance, even a little, is really hard to her, but it'll be quite rewarding for her to do so.
As for Alejandro, he's a badly traumatized and hurt person, a very fragile being in a world of giants, who has discovered that he couldn't live without that monstrously gigantic MAJOR who is like everything wrong with them up to 20. From base 5. ANd yet, he has power over her, and need to realise it and that he must not abuse it. It'll be a part of the future stories.
I'm happy that you enhjoy the Holodek, I mean the Bond Plane ! It'll allow me to play with a lot of various size and possibilities in the future. I think.
Thanks for reading me and my break was nice. The return to work, not so much, I've have a fire in my throat all day, and couldn't bring myself to write anything today...