Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2019 6:33 PM Title: I'm angry, yes !

Nice to see whats going on in the background between the Crossover Special by expanding on the characters histories. Everyone still trying to get into Izzy's pants and failing by acting the usual way by treating Minors as pets/items with no say in any matters.

Wondering if Alejandro might lose it one day and just shut out all Majors from his mind even Shannon and Lindsey for acting like they know what is best for him because he is a Minor. Shannon for being a control freak that might end up hurting not just Alejandro but others because of jealousy. Lindsey for trying to "protect" Alejandro like a baby even though she struck him down and still belittles him.

Cant wait and see if Shannon and Mei's plan backfires spleddly on them for trying to control Izzy and use her as a pawn. This should bring them both down a peg and also make Mei realize she is fucking up her chances with Izzy by acting the wrong way, think she already had an inn with Izzy but this might just make her dead last in the running. This also applies to Lindsey and Sabrina for acting like Majors all the time and not as civilized people.

Thanks for the updates keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !

Sadly, you'll have to wait a certain amount of time for the resolution of the cross over since the Interlude released tomorrow will be the last bit of it for a time !

But don't worry, it'll still add to the crazyness ! 

Concerning Lindsey and Shannon (and the other main MAJORS) it a balancing act because I want them to be sympathetic but also flawed and deeply ingrained in their mainstream culture. They grew uo in a world where linors are seen as prized possession, not really peoples, in the end.

Therefore, even characters like them can't see the minors as their equals. Shannon truly deeply  love Alejandro, but she won't treat her the same way she would treat a MAJOR fiancé. He won't have any access to the inner working of her firms, for instance.

That being said, balancing those two aspects of the MAJORS is actually a main drive for the story and it adds to the reactions Alejandro could have. Je wouldn't have slapped Lindsey otherwise. And it took him a lot of guts : the last time he truly went against a MAJOR, he lost an arm after all.