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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2019 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

Holy shit! For a second I thought she was going to put him in her other piece of underwear... ;)

Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

why did you want to ruin the story,you made it disgusting no one wants to read about a gross woman im sorry it could have been a good or great story it's like you hate women but I do have to say you are a good writer I would like to read more of your writing but like this one 



Author's Response:

At this point it just sounds like you're willfully reading something you figured out several chapters ago that you don't like.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Extremely descriptive. I never thought about his seeing Roberta's flaws on her face so up close. He is completely helpless. Loved her dangling him upside down by his left ankle.

Author's Response:

There's more to come soon

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