Holy crap, an update to one of my favorite vore series ever.  I always hold out hope that you'll eventually get back to it ;D ;D ;D

But anyway, jokes and references aside I've been watching this story very careefully since it's beginning always excited to see a new chapter released. With this chapter I planned to do a review, but life got in the way.

First some thoughts on your Author's Note. For a first foray into the wiriting world you hit it out of the freaking park. Every moment hit and I feel like now that it's complete I need to go back and reread the entire thing to get a sense of how everything fits together. I understand losing a lot of what makes a story appealing the further in you go but depending on what it is you felt was appealing I think you still had it going all the way through.

To me the story was about "Ms Hyde", about Valerie and how she changed, what kind of person she became and even why. It all started with Crystal and just kept going from there. One experience changed her entire life, her entire perspective and this is just a chronicle of that change (not to mention all the things she went through before that). Even when Valerie reveals to Sierra in this chapter how eating Crystal changed her life, it felt very intimate and human (not to mention the other intimate stuff going on). I could feel the remorse of Valerie losing her best friend and feeling her life spiral out of her control. This entire story, she's had massive ups, shes had sour downs and each has shaped who she is and who she will become. That's what I think in the end made this so appealing, was not just Valerie herself but her struggle going forward with this new nature.

Anyway, that's just me and what I took away from it. I'm really sad to see this story come to a close but really excited to see what you have planned next. This truly has cemented you as one of my favorite vore authors. If you post it I'll read it, even if I don't review it. ;) Thanks for this story!