Reviews For Mom's Toy World
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Reviewer: Ess-rets Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2019 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Entrusted with a World

I just discover this story, it's absolutely amazing! I hope you can continue this story, even if you stop it. 

(The focus around the power that the woman have over millions of people is abolutely insane!)

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Entrusted with a World

I really like how you can do moms point of view and the people’s. Like the husband wife conversation, really good transitions!!! Maybe in a future chapter more feet stuff? Unlimited potential.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I figured it was a good way to get both sides of Mom's play, without resorting to monologing or one sided interactions :P

 

I'm having a bunch of fun writing this though! Just the idea of a narcissistic, entitled suburban mother having nearly unlimited power over a million people is so wonderful I think; their first time seeing Mom being just her tight nylon clad feet in the sky as she fishes for compliments xP

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 24 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entrusted with a World

This is incredibly promising

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