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Reviewer: ThickBeast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2024 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Damn now I'm kinda jealous of Amber. But really someone really, really should have stood up and taken that blasted headset from Amber by force. And do anything to de-escalate with Lauren. Compliment her, acknowledge and praise her hardworked achievements, be empathetic and understanding from her POV of a business coming in her house like they own the place. 

At least I would have. Anything to put that foot down. 

Amber LITERALLY made the whole situation worse with every threat and insult! 

There’s a 50/50 change I would have offered myself and definitely Amber's moronic ass, as a "sacrifice". Mom can have Amber, and Brooke can have me. With only a few health conditions for me, Amber made her grave. 

Nice job with the depth visual detail on Brooke's and Lauren's feet and socks. And the destructive power behind them.  

Hope one day you make another one. Really I do. Maybe a continuation of Amber’s new life? If she lives which I want her to... for now

Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2019 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is a classic.  I definitely think it needs a sequel.

Reviewer: Quicksilver Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

This giant family is begging to be revisited, especially since we just got a tease of Brooke’s sister, Katie, never getting a chance to see her and only hearing about her once, when we learn that she is at high school soccer practice.  It would be interesting to see if Katie takes more after her dad and thinks of man bugs as her equals, or if her feelings fall somewhere in between the other members of her family, showing mercy toward man bugs, at least as long as they know their place.  Imagine how Ben said that man bugs don’t REALLY clean people’s feet, only for someone to walk in on Katie after she’s peeled off her cleats and sweaty socks and has man bugs, borrowed from a soccer teammate, lined up between her toes, licking away dutifully at her perspiration.


Building off Rainman’s comment, it does seem unrealistic at first that Brooke and Lauren (and so many other characters in similar stories) could kill people with such indifference, but we have so many examples, not only throughout history but in the modern day, of people treating others as subhuman, and that’s when people are roughly the same size.  If some people were a quarter inch tall compared to others, all bets would be off, and speaking the same language and having the technology to communicate with each other probably wouldn’t make a difference in most cases. People actually do reason like Lauren when she says, “If God didn’t want me to step on them, he wouldn’t have made them so small.”  It is notable that Brooke and Lauren never refer to Amber, Dan, Sara, and company as “people,” in fact telling Ben that they’re NOT people; after all, you can’t step on 50 “people” at once. And, even though Ben clearly thinks “man bugs” are no different from him and his family except for being a different size, what can he really do? He knows Lauren has destroyed cities in the past and that she still doesn’t regret it, and she openly admits to killing man bugs at a friend’s house just recently, but it’s not worth it for him to alienate his family by berating them when what they’re doing is socially acceptable and they’re going to do it anyway, so he simply has to kiss his wife, walk out of the kitchen, and go on living his life.  I have to say, the casual way they discuss Lauren rampaging and destroying cities reminds me of this picture, and makes me think that ads like this might be popular in Giant Land: https://bigiolax.deviantart.com/art/justgtsthings-649274528.


It’s funny how Amber refers to “us normal(-sized) people,” even though the fact that plants and animals, like the grass (“They probably got lost in the grass or something”) and dogs (“Maybe a dog ate them”) are scaled to the “giants,” making it seem less like they’re giants than that their houseguests are just very, very tiny compared to not only them, but everything else.  I suppose “big” and “small” are relative terms, though, and “Take a Tour to the Land of Normal-Sized People” just doesn’t have the same ring to it. I love the word “giant.” I like the word “giantess” too, but even when referring specifically to titanic girls and women, sometimes it’s nice to occasionally switch off to calling them “giants” like you did. “Giantess” takes a bit more effort to say, whereas “giant” just quickly rolls off the tongue and has more gravitas behind it.  GIANT.


I’m hoping to see more of this universe, even if it’s not these particular giants, but I appreciate this story on its own too.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for this great review.

I agree, definitely a story that warrants a follow up including Katie along with her older sister and mother as well.  That's a good idea and I'll keep it in mind if/when I write another story in this universe.  Definitely something to think about and consider.

Lauren and Brooke are definitely two people any smaller person would want to avoid haha.  They view the smaller people as pests and although it does seem a bit unrealistic that they would act this way towards people, their attitudes suggest that they don't really see themselves killing "people" but simply dealing with a minor annoyance.  Ben has accpeted that his wife has different views and that no matter his opinion she'll keep doing what she wants.  He can't stop her and knows she won't change.  I've come across that particular picture and the past and had forgotten about it until you posted the link to it.  It's definitely a personal favorite of mine as I find the concept quite enjoyable and funny how it's a take off of just girly things lol.  Writing about Giant Land ads in a future story may be something I have to do and who knows, some might resemble this in their world.

Amber, Dan, Sara and the like see themselves as normal and that there are giants while the giants, like Ben, Lauren and Brooke, think of themselves as the normal sized people and that "man bugs" are the abnormality.  Both groups think their the "normal sized" humans and think the other group is the abnormality so kind of up tot he reader to decide which group is "normal".  Giant Land has everything to scale for the giants, such as grass and dogs, but where Dan and Sara and Amber are from, everything is their scale so they have grass that is "normal sized" and dogs that are also "normal sized" but would be tiny to someone like Lauren.  This exists on a different world in a different universe, so it's a planet that has land scaled to both giants and smaller people.  Dan and Sara have taken a trip to a different country where everything is bigger but in their home country everything is their size and scale.  I honestly didn't really think about much of the backstory to this world and didn't bother to include anything to address it since this is already a rather long story for a one shot.  I hope I kind of explained it well in this paragraph as I have the idea in my head but can't exactly clearly describe it and am afraid I may have only raised more questions lol.

"I suppose “big” and “small” are relative terms, though, and “Take a Tour to the Land of Normal-Sized People” just doesn’t have the same ring to it." <- hit the nail on the head with this point lol.

Giant definitely has a nice ring to it and conveys a great image with less effort.

As far as more of this universe, I didn't originally plan to write anymore but after getting positive feedback I've reconsidered.  I'm debating doing some short stories to further explore and expand this universe with different characters as well as maybe some short stories centering around the Hayden family, particularly Lauren, Brooke, and Katie and expand on them.  No promises on any stories though but I may return one day to these characters and universe but I'm not sure how soon that will be.

Hope I answered some of you thoughts and didn't create more questions lol.  Thank you for reading and for the thoughtful review.

Reviewer: Iamborede Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2018 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I created an account specifically to tell you that this story is amazing. The twists and turns, the characters, and the world you built are all exactly what I like in GTS stories. The foot and sock stuff was perfect, like how she teased and taunted them before the crushing began. I really hope you expand upon this universe and/or just give us more content featuring this giant family. Let this not be the last time we've heard the booming footsteps of the giants of giantland! 10/10



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it so much and feeback is always appreciated!

I'm glad you liked it and found it enjoyable.

After the positive feedback I've received, I've definitely been considering to expand the universe and/or at the very least write another story featuring this family.  No promises but I'm considering it.

Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for the response to my review. You make several good points there, especially about the unreality of the giantess genre in general.

And by the way, I probably shouldn't have said that the idea alone was good. Even though this kind of story isn't really my cup of tea, the writing itself is excellent. The buiding tension as we gradually grasp the mom's intent is palpable (reminds me of the scene in A Bronx Tale, where the gangster boss locks the door and says, "And now youse can't leave.")

I liked that scene when the little couple share a last kiss, too.

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment, I appreciate that.  The building tension is exactly what I was aiming for as the reader slowly realizes what the mom has in mind.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the writing and the build up.  The fact that it reminded you of a scene like that is pretty cool.  The story ended up being much longer than I had initially anticipated so it's nice to hear people appreaciate the writing and story, even if it's not really what they are looking for.

Once again, thanks for reviewing and reading!

Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2018 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I wouldn't usually read or respond to this kind of story. First, the size ratio is not to my liking; meaninglful interaction isn't possible with such a size difference. And I really hate the illogical, unrealistic idea that giants would automatically see people as buglike and expendable just because they are tiny. People don't just suddenly become psychopaths because they're big.

Having said all that, the idea itself is awesome. A tour among the giants. It has kind of a Jurassic Park feel to it. You just know something's going to go wrong.

I wish I had thought of it first.



Author's Response: I want to start off by saying thank you for not giving a half star review just because you don't like the setup lol. That being said, I agree with your points about meaningful interaction not being possible and it being illogical and unrealistic that giants would automatically be violent and cruel to those smaller than them, however, giants are unrealistic so I get little bit of leeway in that regard haha. Also I don't think most people on this site would want to read a story where the giantesses aren't messing with the smaller people so I figured I would go the big, stompy giant route since that's what I'm used to writing and it fits my writing style.. The background to this isn't that these people just became big overnight, they've always been big and some of them don't see the tiny people as equals. At the end of the day it doesn't really matter what's realistic or not since this whole site isn't really rooted in reality very much. I'm glad you like the idea though and of course you knownsomething had to go wrong lol. I figure it's kind of a different take and I'm glad you thought the idea was awesome even if the story wasn't overly appealing to you. Thank you for reading and the thoughtful review!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2018 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

The husband/wife conflict is a wnderful added touch in stories like these. That said the mother/daughter you introduced are spectacular bitches...

 

Tremendous all around.



Author's Response:

Wasn't going to include it originally but thought it would be kind of a fun little extra bit.  Yes they are quite the pair lol.

Thank you!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2018 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

A truly fantastic story. Mrs. Hayden was Awesome. She definitely taught them a lesson. I wish she had worn her heels. I imagine how frightening they would have been to see. I really enjoyed your writing. You described everything very well. A really entertaining story.

Author's Response:

She was a lot of fun to write.  Maybe in a future installement she will if I return to these characters.  I agree it would definitely be frightening to see her in a pair of high heels towering over some unlucky little people.

Thank you for the compliments and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2018 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the story :) I hope that there is a part II of this.
Was hoping for more action for Brooke and some for her Sister especially during/after their softball/Soccer practice.

Author's Response: For now it's a stand alone but don't be surprised if I return to these characters and universe in the future :)

Reviewer: TehZach Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cool concept and AMAZING story! I hope to see more of these two women in the future! :D



Author's Response:

Definitely potential for a future story somewhere down the line featuring these two women again so don't rule it out.   :)

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