[Report This]Date: March 31 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5: help is on the way
A nice little surprise, Candi seems like she could help the little guy get some revenge if he wanted or cause more mischief of her own.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2018 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
I enjoy the idea of her torturing him just to make clips online, its a pretty unique idea. It will be interesting to see how far she pushes him. As for where i'd like to see it go, its upto you :-). I like to write each chapter almost off the cuff, i don't have any solid plans, just ideas that evolve and change as the story goes on.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2018 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I thought it was a set up at first but you've hooked me.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is shaping up to be a fine little tale...
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!
[Report This]Date: March 25 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great stuff as always. I'm really liking this one.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2018 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
I like where this could be going. Love his balancing act between fear and disrespect.
Author's Response:
Where would you like to see it go? I never write with a concrete plan, so different angles and ideas are always welcome.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2018 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
It's like watching my parents' marriage.
Author's Response:
Is there a happy ending to that story?
[Report This]Date: March 23 2018 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: every little battle.
Very interesting...