Date: January 30 2019 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tastes of the Good Life
HOLY HELL, WHAT A HOT FUCKNG STORY!! I hope you write a sequel someday! :D
Date: May 09 2018 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tastes of the Good Life
Wow!
I'm happy with his decision. Even though it felt kinda rushed at the end, I enjoyed it.
Love how Gloria keeps him with her for most times and that the family knows it.
That dream in the beginning actually felt real. This story had such a crazy twist last chapter that I was prepared for anything. Glad you took advantage of it and convinced me that this dream might have been real. Any other story and I could probably tell. You sold it well.
Well, I can't wait for any future stories you plan on writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking through to the end, and I agree I think it got a little rushed but I wanted to finish before my motivation completely vanished. Your reaction to the dream was exactly what I wanted, I wanted to make fun of that abrupt twist (/ my lazy writing lol).
I didn't realize going in how much time it would take to write one of these so a future story will definitely be better planned but more slowly released. Thanks again for the continued reviews!