[Report This]Date: November 02 2023 9:31 PM Title: Emma's Challenge
Wow, what a chapter!
I admit, it was a little tough at first to figure out what was going on when Emma wanted Aaron to use his own tiny body as a sex toy while her mind was in his body and his mind was in her body. But eventually I understood it.
Near the beginning, I like hearing the thoughts of Emma and how she wanted someone who could be her date and her dildo and how that’s every woman’s dream. Sounds like my dream too except I want to be that date and dildo for someone such as Emma. It’s such a hot kind of relationship.
I also liked that small scene on the bed where Emma has wrapped Aaron like a teddy bear and pinned his face to her chest. Then the fact that she rolled over and used her body weight to pin him to the mattress was amazing! I would love to see her do that again, but instead Emma could have Aaron’s face at the level of her pussy, and then she rolls over and her crotch is basically pinning his face to the mattress. Perfect way to sleep for the night!
Then we got the sex scene. As I mentioned earlier it was a bit complicated for me to picture what was happening. I’m also surprised to see Emma embrace being in Aaron’s position during this scene. I’m actually impressed that she even decided to try it. It was very humbling to see her learn that she couldn’t handle being a dildo and it even showed how rough she usually is with Aaron when she used him as a dildo. The difference is that Emma could also quit like it’s a video game, but Aaron is forced to endure it until it’s over.
That next plan with Dom sounds insane! I mean, is Emma actually going to be in Aaron’s mind next time? That would be such a plot twist. Wow, so many possibilities for that situation.
Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Honestly, the twisted pronouns are a hard thing to make work! I
want to communicate that the two characters have swapped minds but it's
so hard to make that make sense. This story has yet a way to go, and I
hope you like it! There is more body-swapping as well, so hopefully I
can make it less confusing!