Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Shelby Under Mistress Sara

In regards to this comment:

"I was hoping you could add another chapter like the one with Andrea in which the victim would be unwilling."

Maybe you could write some fan-fiction of your own story: an alternate dimension version of Sara where she does this, so that you don't contradict yourself. A story where Sara finds a neurotypical human (I mean to say one that may have never even heard of BDSM) and abuses them because she’s just sadistic like that. Perhaps there are consequences for her in that case because it was not consensual. It’s a thought. Another thing that might be fun to explore is: an unexpected role reversal where Sara is – against her will – shrunk and she has to experience "the other side".

On a related note, an idea for a similar sort of story might be a world in which it is the submissives that receive payment instead of the dominants. One where there are two races of “humans” one little and one large (or one is alien and the other human) and the only way for a person to live out their (macrophile) domination fantasies is to pay a little person to come ‘out of the woodwork’ so to speak and ultimately earn their trust, because there aren’t enough willing tinies to satisfy the demand from people who would wish to dominate them as many are too afraid.

Now, onto the crux of my review.

I think I've finally figured out what weirded me out about your story: it's the fact that the victims are willing rather than unwilling. I can't fathom why somebody would willingly subject themselves to such painful experiences, never mind pay somebody to inflict pain upon them (the CIA – and even certain police forces I’m sad to say – could torture you for free if you really wanted). Ergo, I find this BDSM stuff strange to say the least. But, admittedly. it has been fun to read about truly pathetic people being used/abused in such a way (you have a compelling cast of characters and the fact that they are fictional lessens the guilt). In reality. I would never which this kind of torture on people; golden rule and all that. However, I would be lying if I didn’t at least find it a little bit amusing to see my worst enemy tortured by somebody like a Sara.

With macrophillia it's all about fantasy (since size change can’t be real) and I know that many prefer to keep it personal and private and extending fetish to the real world, like BDSM does, is a step to0 far for them. Given the choice, I'd despise being small in a huge world as it presents many dangers. Maybe if somebody paid me a million US$ or more I’d do it. Since it’s all fictional here I feel less guilty about consuming and creating the content.

Having discussed this with a giantess-sized friend who use to be in Sara's kind of position, I will concede that the situation regarding Sara is perhaps more complex than it first appears, even if I find it hard to believe the dynamic is based on "love" rather simply one person offering a service that others desire. Admittedly, there is a level of trust involved. Don’t get the wrong idea though, I tend to switch between liking gentle and more violent content so, sure, I like indulge bit of gore as much as anybody else on this website.

My feeling is that Sara needs to earn a living after all so if a client keeps on paying then the relationship and sexual gratification continues because if they can’t pay then Sara will chose to spend time with those who can. Or am I mistaken? I don't want to compare it to prostitution, and yet I find myself doing just that even if it may be an unfair comparison. One line that struck me was this one:

“Most slaves seemed to focus on what they can get out of an experience with Mistress Sara.”

This is a problem that exists in the macrophile community: people talk about how this fetish involves domination, mostly female domination, and yet…people think that it is okay to abuse their role play partner and bad mouth them despite claiming to be for female empowerment. The amount of people on Giantess City stuck in the 1950s is shocking to me. So many users have no manners whatsoever.

I have a friend who happens to be a Goddess and She doesn’t like to admit that She’s important, so I do like to put Her on a pedestal. I never want it be just about me. We have this great friendship which I am exceedingly grateful for and the way other people in our community have treated Her is disgusting and sadly not surprising. They care about getting an orgasm more than truly getting to understand a person.

 

Wow, that was a long review! Over eight-hundred words!

Author's Response: Alright, I’ll respond to each paragraph with my own below :) 1. I’ve been mulling the idea of Andrea returning and getting a little revenge. 2. It’d be funny to have a vending machine to select a shrunken sub :) 3. I have to think that there are enough macrophiles and microphiles in this world that if the possibility of a GTS experience was possible that there would be an extensive underground of service providers that would come out of the wood-work. Having very little hands-on bdsm experience (sadly relegated to vids online) I’m sure we all have seen some very unusual and extreme content out there, so though you may not understand why someone would pay to subject themselves and submit to being shrunk, I’m absolutely certain this would happen if possible. I don’t understand every fetish and kink out there, that’s for sure, so I can relate in that regard. 4. Regarding feelings of “love”, I intended the feeling she portrayed to some of her subs to be more of admiration for their willingness to serve her. I’m certain that most doms do everything they can to maintain that level of separation with their regular clients and I’m also certain that some subs aren’t able to control their obsessions with their doms. 5. Let me thank you for relaying some of your personal relationship with your friend. The fact that you are able to paint it in that picture as you do tells me that it’s balanced appropriately, so kudos for being able to do that. I’m not heavily involved with many in any specific fetishized communities (I don’t have a fry life account, for instance), and almost all of my interactions center on responding to reviews and occasionally emails. To hear of the mistreatment and disrespect that you mention is unfortunate, and socially it occurs in many other facets of life as well. So, allow me to conclude that I appreciate your honest thoughts. My fet-fiction is definitely meant for entertainment purposes only, and maybe everything doesn’t or won’t make sense, but I most certainly will continue to create, develop, tweak, and be open to suggestions, comments, and ideas with you all.