Reviewer: Toerider Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2018 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

This was GREAT!  I loved the premise.  Please tell me the finale was a setup for the sequel?  :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. Maybe in the future, gotta focus on other writing presently.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2018 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Finale

Hope we get a sequel, this story rocked

Reviewer: Starlord73 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2018 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I hope French manicure girl comes back

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2018 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Still Tiny

Excellent, well done.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 - I'm Found

He's stuck being small, cool.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Almost Saved

Anna is found that's so cool. Having the beautiful blond with her beautiful fingernails searching for him was fabulous. It's hard not to run out waving your arms. A scary but mind blowing scene.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2018 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Hoping to be Found

Excellent. I hope they are found.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Party Starts

Will someone notice them?

Reviewer: psychotropic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2018 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I absolutely love this story! Detailed unaware stuff is always my favorite, especially details involving feet and shoes. I like the details here. Keep it up!!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2018 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Looking for the Girlfriend

I am enjoying this, poor people should've went UPS.

 

Slightly less chance for fuck ups.