Date: July 02 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Two
This is an amazing story, great writing skills! I don't think there's a way to stop Melanie - she'll get what she wants!
Author's Response:
Melanie is a force to reckon with, that's for sure. All she wants is to be united with the love of her live~ Thank you for the kind words, I appreciate it!
Date: June 29 2018 8:13 AM Title: Chapter Two
I meant *fair game btw lol
[Report This]Date: June 28 2018 10:51 PM Title: Chapter Two
I'm loving this story!
Author's Response:
I'm loving this review! Thank you thank you.
Date: June 28 2018 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Two
Man I loved loved loved this chapter too!! Really loved the difference in character of Melanie and how she confidently and cruelly dominated the shrunken Scarlett but was timid and overly excited when she shrunk Adrian. Not entirely sure what you meant in your response to my first review but I’m really really looking forward to seeing Melanie torment and be cruel to some of her toys (which I’m assuming she’s mostly gonna be careful with Adrian for the most part but I’m sure the others are Dark game 😉). Really really love this story so far and hope it goes on for many chapters to be honest!
Author's Response:
Mhmm, Melanie is fun to explore. Making her interactions so different depending on who she's with allows for all sorts of fun parts of her archetype to shine. Thank you again for the review~
Date: June 28 2018 10:01 PM Title: Chapter Two
Impressive start... Really well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Impressive review... Really nice and makes me feel good.
Thank you for reading~ I hope you like chapter three as well!