Date: June 05 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter Five
One of the best chapter's of any story I've read in a while. I can't wait to continue reading it
[Report This]Date: July 16 2018 6:20 AM Title: Chapter Five
Best chapter so far! We get more glimpses into Melanie's 'derranged' mind. If smart, Adrian should realize the psychopathy and use the knowledge to her advantage.
I like how the tale borders upon needing the 'violence' tag, but walks the line rather than outright crossing it. Going too far in the direction of 'violence' or 'gentle' tends to make stories more boring for me to read, partly due to their predictability. Melanie threatens to head down the path of typical power-hungry, evil giantess, but hasn't yet, at least not entirely, and it keeps me interested. Perhaps most interesting was her thoughts: "You would give people a second chance, so I gave Wormslut one." It shows the positive influence Adrian can have on her, one that doesn't seem to have diminished even though Adrian is small. Very curious to see how it plays out.
Author's Response:
Ah, it's nice that this dynamic isn't lost on my readers. I too like how Adrian has this effect on Melanie, and what effects Melanie has on her. Writing for these two is quite fun, and I'm excited to get to some points that really show off their characters. Thank you again for the review, it's always nice to read these comments!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter Five
You have officially crafted one of the best socio working her way to psychopath in the history of this site.
Well done.
Author's Response:
I'm officially happy to hear that! Very kind review, thank you~
Date: July 15 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Five
WOW. This chapter was well worth the wait!! The only reason it took me so long to write this review is because I’m such a slow reader lol. This is already on its way to being the best giantess story EVER, with absolutely no exaggeration. And I’m so so so glad to see the tease at the end about Melanie planning to kidnap more tiny women! Your writing is some of the best out there, dare I say THE best. Glad to hear this story should be getting back to its 2 to 3 day updates but either way, I’m just excited that this story even exists!
Author's Response:
You're too kind for such a glowing review~ I really appreciate the commitment to keep reading! I'm glad my story can be so entertaining that it can earn the title "best giantess story ever" from someone, haha. Thank you thank you thank you! I'm trying my best to keep updates steady, so I hope you and others can continue having patience while I find the best workflow for this project~