[Report This]Date: March 24 2023 9:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Holy, shit, I-
This story had both the perfect beginning and the perfect ending, oh my GOOOOSH
The penultimate chapter had me emotional, but the very final one had me squealing in delight, oh my goooosh <3
Seriously, with that penultimate chapter you almost had me abandoning my cruelest tendencies, but the final brought them RIGHT back and more forceful than ever~
Flat out, THE best size series I've ever read- and reading size stories is practically all I do in my free time, so that's saying a lot.
SOLID 10/10, and this is maybe the second time I've ever seriously rated anything that.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
This was an amazing read. Not just a typical fanservice, but a well told story with interesting characters and some good twists. I would love to read an epilogue telling just how far into madness Adrian has gone now that they are together. I look forward to more stories from you. Keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: April 29 2020 10:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
sooo. i felt like i had to say something after i spent almost a entire day reading every single chapter as each one got more and more interesting. i havent felt such reading joy in years and i cheered so happily when it ended the way it did. it was so interesting and being teh vore maniac i am one of the best parts was the vore scenes heh.. wish it had more with melanie.. heh. this is truly one of the greatest stories i have ever read and im so happy it ended good. i just wanted to say that.
9/10 only reason why it isnt a 10 out of 10 is bcs im cheeky as heck and it needs more vore for me heh. :3
[Report This]Date: May 20 2019 10:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Rarely have I read a story in this community that filled me with such rapture. I absolutely loved everything about this story. The shrunken woman genre is my favorite and this story just nailed it – everything I love about the genre was captured so perfectly. I love the cruelness mixed with the gentleness. I loved the motive behind Melanie in that she wasn’t a bland sociopath; she actually had depth. A great anti-hero in my opinion. I was cheering her on the whole time. God, there’s so much to say. I don’t think I can praise you enough Curse Crazy. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this great story. Oh, and thank you, thank you, for that vore scene and the bit where Erin was shrunk to micro-size. Those were such wonderful moments in the tale. I do enjoy how the story ended.
I would love it, if you explored Juniper and Nicky in greater detail. I love how Juniper was so grossed out about holding a naked woman – a detail often overlooked in these stories. Their relationship at the end of the story had only started. I’m super curious how Nicky and Juniper’s relationship would evolve. What about the pages Juniper stole from Melanie? Anything there she could explore? Will Melanie ever confront Juniper? So many possibilities.
Paige. I was actually falling for her. Although I’m happy you didn’t turn this into a mushy story, where the good character wins and evil Melanie gets defeated, I can’t help but think what would’ve happened should Paige win… Paige is not a saint. The was she was callously rummaging through books in the library while the SW ran from her was wonderful. I could see her morphing into an evil bitch. Maybe like a Chaotic-Good character. If people get hurt/killed around her, oh well…so long as she achieves her goal of cleaning the University. I’m also super curious how she would’ve treated Melanie should she shrink.
Anyway, great story. I can’t wait to read more from ya!
Author's Response:
A very wonderful review that tops off the reviews... Thank you for this feedback! It's quite dear to me. I really am happy that you enjoyed Endless so much, and that some of the content in particular stood out to you so much~ If you pushed me into a corner and put a gun up to my head, I'd probably say that entire sequence with Candi at the apartment is my favorite stretch in the story. It really kicks off the conflict with its plot twists, conflicting emotions, action and suspense, past relationships, dire decisions... I don't enjoy tooting my own horn, but I do particularly like that entire segment, especially for how little interaction there is between people and tinies. Adrian and the others go through various ordeals and dramas without a giantess getting involved until late, yet it's still, to me, really good shrink content.
Haha, Nicky and Juniper became fan favorites it seems... I don't have anything conrete plans for expanding Endless forward, unfortunately, so Juniper and Nicky's relationship likely won't have more to it. I imagine that the two live very peacefully going forward~ Juniper is respectful and loves Nicky's company, and Nicky really just lucks out since Melanie and Adrian basically forget about her. I had some theories that Juniper and Nicky might try to capitalize on the situation, try to find ways to discreetly sell lewd photos of Nicky or something. I haven't thought of a way to include that into a bigger, more interesting story, but perhaps as a stray short, I might end up influenced to write it~
I do wish I could have given Paige more development. In hindsight, both her and Bradz should have been introduced a lot earlier. If I ever rewrite Endless, I would probably include the two as background characters in the earlier chapters, set them up a bit more nicely to come back to. Paige is very interesting in particular and I didn't get as much time to show her off~ Ah, well. I'm glad you liked her so much with what little she got! Indeed, Paige is by no means a good person. I hoped she'd serve as a contrast of craziness to Melanie. Melanie did what she did out of passionate love, whereas Paige acted on avengance. They were meant to be rivals of obsession clashing against one another. To that effect, Paige is also a weird, creepy girl... Probably why I liked her so much!
Thank you again for this review. It was a pleasure reading it and I hope you can continue enjoying the world of Endless through the Never-Endings~
[Report This]Date: May 02 2019 10:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Admittedly I am kind of bummed for the tinies especially after Adrian was forced to kill Erin etc.. but its an unexpected ending so kudos to that. Happy for Nicky/Juniper though.
Author's Response:
Unexpected was certainly what I aimed for, haha! It is a downer ending for most of the women, for sure. Melanie and Adrian at least got a true romance ending, and Nicky and Juniper are just fine! There are bright sides, here and there, haha. Thank you for reading and reviewing all this time, it really has meant a lot to me to be encouraged in such a way~
Date: May 02 2019 3:58 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
This has been a fucked up rollercoaster. Thanks for writing this!
In the end, I'm just glad at least Nicky and Juniper got a happy ending.
Author's Response:
Indeed, Nicky and Juniper sail away quite nicely. I really enjoyed their conclusion, the contrast between them and the others is, to me, very important for the theme of Endless to stick. It served a little more than just a stray happy ending, I hoped~ Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: May 02 2019 11:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I stand corrected! I'm really glad everything worked out for Mel, she got the ending she deserved. This was an absolutely fantastic end to an amazing series, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what more you put out! Thanks so much for writing all of this
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank you~ It's been a pleasure bringing Endless to the world and to see people enjoy it so much. I'm glad the ending landed! With the twist that it was, I worried quite a bit that it might seem off, haha.