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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2020 2:58 PM Title: New Limitations

Kirinhalut went from having no travel companions to having a lot in a short time. That must be so cosy! No wonder she doesn't want our tiny protagonist to tell them stuff that could get them killed.

Speaking about the company, the pixie is really mean. Telling everyone that our protagonist is useless. Maybe she is jealous she isn't the tiniest anymore and therefore she has to share attention or something. At least there are two nice people in the party.

Our protagonist is lucky that he didn't get stuffed into a boot, that would have been a lot more uncomfortable. Kirinhalut being pure evil seems more and more like a farce at this point, she still doesn't choose the worst she can.

Thank you for picking up this story again, I like it. Hopefully until next time and as always, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

What better cover for a succubus walking around than a party of adventurers?  She just has to make sure the little guy keeps his mouth shut for a bit.

Kiri has her preferred methods, and crushing someone in your hand is, I think, pretty bad!

Thank you for reviewing!  I figured I should start working on my backlog of unfinished stories before getting too burned out again.

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