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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2020 2:10 PM Title: Sinister Plots

Sorry for not reviewing earlier!

I was busy moving.

Some of these girls are really hostile, while some are inspiring.

I think Bushwack is just a case of sibling rivalry. She is just kinda jealous she doesn't get all the tiny attention!

I'm curious as to where this story goes! Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

You might be on to something there!  Now that Bushwack isn't the smallest, she's jealous of how tiny he is, but also mad he can't do anything.  Maybe she'll come around to him, though.

You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2020 4:18 AM Title: Sinister Plots

To be honest, I’m impressed that he hasn’t just accepted that they’re going to die. Kiri’s influence may cause it, but this chapter really drove home how some of them don’t really mind hurting him just because they can. I’m curious to know how much of this is Kiri controlling them and how much is her drawing out their deeper ugliness. That would explain why she’s only able to sway half of the party.

And while I am hoping for a happy ending for the protagonist, part of me wouldn’t mind if he had to endure more pixie abuse and finger flicks.

Author's Response:

Kiri's agent has something much more creative in store for them than mere death.  The truth is, Kiri hasn't had to directly influence anyone yet, all she's had to do is give minor suggestions.  When she finally does have to exert direct influence on someone, I hope it'll be clear.

Who says those have to be mutually exclusive?

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2020 7:54 AM Title: Sinister Plots

Holding out hope for a happy ending for our protagonist and his new human friends.



Author's Response:

What about his non-human friends?  Don't they deserve a happy ending, too?

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