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Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2020 8:40 PM Title: Tempers Boil

YES! TAKE THAT, Lell! I wish she could have gotten chewed out or even slapped around a bit, but I admit that her brand of cruelty was less tasteful to me perhaps because she didn’t acknowledge the little guy at all. But man I’m pumped for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

She got kicked out of the party, I think that's a pretty good chewing out!  Things will get more complrex and interesting in the next few chatpers, since it's building toward a big climax.

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