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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2020 10:09 PM Title: Midnight Surprise

I was actually expecting Margret to so something horrible first. I didnt expect Sondra to shrink herself. How nice of her!

Seems almost like Kirinhalut is controlling Margret. I wonder how they will ever leave this evil also of hers. On the other hand, she also made Sondra fall in love so...

Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

Sondra's just a real sweetie who wanted to hold the MC with something besides her entire hand, all she wants to do is vibe.

The powers of a succubus are powerful and insidious, but can they create positive human emotions?  I guess we'll see.

You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2020 7:41 AM Title: Midnight Surprise

Aww, Sondra is so adorable. She's too pure for this setting. I hope to see her and her little man survive this tale. Even if our warrior has to permanetly sacrafice his chance to be restored back to normal (which i see as likely happening) to stop Kirinhalut's plans and save the rest of the party; I can easily see Sondra keeping her promise of keeping him around and loving him. I hope to see the rest of the girls make it out too. Even Llelwyl, but only on the condition she does something redeemable like save the tiny when Kirinhalut's manipulation and ruse is revealed andshe tried to crush him for good and actually apologize to him for her treatment of him. Their 1st post save the world quest can be taking a request to rescue the prison jar victims from the witch's hut after reporting it to the guild and meet a new interesting character with a followup request after bringing the victims to a temple for dispell restoration.



Author's Response:

I'm not going to confirm anything, but it's great to have readers so invested that they predict several of many very plausible end conditions!

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2020 1:49 AM Title: Midnight Surprise

Oh man, the crew is starting to become suspicious of outside interference! And the Tiny Human is starting to realize that Lell wasn't nice to begin with, but was pushed by Kiri. Margaret though, that was a twisted and awesome way to manipulate her playfulness. And BUSHWACK must sleep like the dead!



Author's Response:

Fool me twice, you can't get fooled again, isn't that the saying? :P Llelwyl being mean and inattentive is par for the course, but Kirinhalut may have made an error by picking sweet, friendly Margret.

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