Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

That moment where he turned and realized he stood no chance against Maddie was such a nice moment. But it still didn't deter him from trying to fight her. Sadly for him, luckily for us.

Maddie trashed him quite severely, even fhough he didn't even say such unreasonable things.  He  was even considerate enough not to disturb the asmr recording.h imagine what she would do if he had said something mean like: "hey maddie, the building rattles under you weight, it's time for a diet" or something like that.

Bonus points if you can get her to crush an actual (miniaturized) bulldozer

also, thanks for writing, it's good to see that you had enough motivation to write at least one other chapter.