Date: October 31 2018 3:32 PM Title: The Accident
Great chapter. Love the teasing/foreshadowing of the sister saying shes gonna run with him in her shoe, or put him between her cheeks
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you for the review!
Date: October 31 2018 1:27 AM Title: Exercising Openness
Nice chapter. I liked the kneeling in the tub to see what it was like to be smaller. So his dad also shrunk. I assume he will make an appearance? Does he live in a dollhouse? Will he eventually go to a female doctor? I like the slow shrinking. I also much prefer the real life aggrevations than any smutty stuff. Enjoying your story.
Author's Response: No, dad wasn’t shrunk, the VitaCorp people are the first known cases of shrinking. Dad is, gone, thought that I wrote that in the first chapter that his passing is why Dave studied vaccinations.
Date: October 27 2018 7:52 AM Title: Good News and Bad News
So the shrinking begins. I'm interested in where you will go with this.
Author's Response:
Yes it does, but it shall be a very slow decent into tiny. ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 26 2018 4:20 AM Title: The Accident
Nice Story ! :) Love Slow shrink ... Continue :3
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I hope to have the new chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 4:53 PM Title: The Accident
great story well written unaware is my favorite
Author's Response: It’s not going to be a completely unaware setting, just little spots here and there.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 1:03 AM Title: Good News and Bad News
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you I’m glad you’re enjoying it!
Date: October 22 2018 7:34 PM Title: The Accident
love where this is going, great writing and build up, cant wait for more!
Author's Response: I’m glad you’re enjoying the story! Thank you for the review!
Date: October 18 2018 3:29 PM Title: The Accident
Glad to see youre back. Your stuff is legendary. Cant wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Haha, I wouldn't call it "legendary" there are far better authors more deserving of that title, but thank you for the kind review, and hopefully I shall finish this one.
Date: October 18 2018 11:40 AM Title: The Accident
Oooh, greatly looking forward to watching this play out.
In the first chapter you show that you have a deft mastery of words and are quite good at establishing characters.
Rock on!
Author's Response:
I'm glad to read that you're enjoying the first chapter and thank you for the kind review.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2018 3:33 AM Title: The Accident
Great start. I see u got the nano tag, is there plans to get him that height?
Author's Response:
Eventually he will get down to around....*shot with tranquilizer dart* We're sorry, but the author is not authorized to disclose that information until the chapter relating to the tagged size has been released, if at all. We thank you for reading the story and hope you continue to support it.
Date: October 17 2018 8:55 PM Title: The Accident
Wow, just the kind of story I was looking for.. and on my bday too
havn't seen a good slow shrink in a while and this looks very promising.. looking forward to the updates. thanks!
Author's Response:
Well first off happy birthday, second off thank you for the kind review.
Lastly I hope that it turns out as good as I would like it too, and I'm glad to read you're enjoying it thus far.
Date: October 17 2018 6:28 PM Title: The Accident
Yes, very interested in seeing this progress. A slow-shrink novel is always great! Would love some footplay when he gets small enough...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind review, and don't worry there will be plenty of foot play from both the mom and sister to satisfy even the most seasoned foot fetishist.
Date: October 17 2018 6:26 PM Title: The Accident
oh crap, just seeing a story that will be in the vein of minuss, with butt and scat tags.....MERCY. please continue!
Author's Response:
Haha I didn't say I could do it as well as Minuss would, but I'll do my best to attempt to emulate his incredible descriptive prowess as best I can, and thank you for the kind review.