[Report This]Date: January 10 2020 8:19 PM Title: Come Inside (Said the Spider to the Fly)
I really like how you did the insertion scene. It was just right for their first time. Interesting that Monica was included, though.
As for what's happening with Monica, I have a couple ideas of what it might be. When she got the headaches last chapter, I thought Jenny might be subconsiously hurting Monica because she has feelings for John herself. That might still be the case hear, where Jenny has subconsiously made Monica develop bad feelings towards John. But what I think is more likely now is that at some point Monica stopped forgetting events as well. I don't know if she thinks they're dreams and is just confused about her feelings or if she actually knows that's whats happening is real and has been going along with it for some reason. Regardless, I'm excited to see where you take this new development.