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Reviewer: ThickBeast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2024 12:00 PM Title: Graduation

Please, come back to this story. I'm so invested in the Beth, Tom and Ashley dynamic its cute. At least with Beth and Tom, i'd definitely hook up with Beth if I didn’t have a slimy "I have to dominate you at every turn sister'. Riley as a sibling.

Reviewer: locutus17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2020 6:58 AM Title: Graduation

In the immortal words of Hunter S Thompson from Fear and Loathing - "Finish the fucking story man!"

Reviewer: cabalinan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2019 7:48 PM Title: Graduation

Excited to see this story get back again!

Reviewer: Fantasizechange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2019 7:42 AM Title: Graduation

This story is so well written. I’m hooked!! Please keep updating

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I shall keep updating, although sometimes I can be a little slow. :)

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2019 7:28 PM Title: Graduation

Yes I too absolutely love the sexually charged scenes also. I think that’s when you are at your best. But I really like how you are building the world and plot in this story. Just hope you don’t abandon it! This is could be a classic in the making!

Author's Response:

Don't worry, no intention to abandon this one and I have plenty of ideas to keep the story fresh. I can just be... a bit of a slow writer sometimes haha. That's kind of you to say so as well, I certainly hope I have it within me to write a classic.

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2019 3:49 AM Title: Graduation

Loved the interaction with Riley's Friends ! Hope to see again the shy one who would have liked to make him kiss her ass but didn't dare do it... 

Amazing stuff as always



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :) 

Don't worry, we'll see a lot more from these two, Beth especially. I have some fun plans for her.

Reviewer: Anynamewilldo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2019 11:13 AM Title: Graduation

I love this story. Can't wait to see where it goes. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you! This is probably my most ambitious project so far so I'll try and take it in interesting directions for sure.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2019 4:53 PM Title: Graduation

The long foot of the law always wins in the end!



Author's Response:

Indeed it does! Hope you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: FTFeet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2019 5:28 PM Title: Graduation

Can't wait :). Your stories inspire me a lot. I've been meaning to ask you, would it be ok if I borrowed your hypnosis idea (with credit of course). I have an idea which is a twist on one of the chapters in Tales of the tiny (volume 1) - The Dangers of Hypnosis.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think I've said so before but your stories are part of the reason I tried writing this kinda stuff so that means a lot :) 

Honestly, go right ahead! That goes for anyone really, I write stuff into my stories that I myself am interesting in so it is always enjoyable to see such ideas in the work of other writers. Can't wait to see what you do with it.

Reviewer: locutus17 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 5:51 PM Title: Graduation

Finish the fuckin story, man! (Fear and loathing)



Author's Response:

I'll do it! Just don't hurt me!

 

All joking aside, I do intend to finish this (eventually). Having a bit of a slow patch and writing non gts foot stuff in the meantime but soon enough the next chapter will be ready. Sorry for the wait! I do appreciate the enthusiasm though haha :)

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2019 6:53 AM Title: Graduation

Hey any news on a update? Love this story and cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Working on it :) Thanks for inquiring, it does let me know that people wanna see this story.

I have been working on other foot fetish stuff on non giantess sites and slowly writing this alongside them. I apologise for keeping you waiting but I shall one day finish the next chapter!

Reviewer: NathanZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 6:35 PM Title: Graduation

This story is amazing! Please continue! :) i am really excited to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will continue this one, I promise! Been writing non giantess fetish stuff for a bit so adding to this whenever I can.

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2019 9:52 AM Title: Graduation

Checking everyday in the hope to see an update ! 

You really hooked me up :)



Author's Response:

Updated my friend! Glad you're enjoying the story, hope you like the latest chapter :)

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2019 2:40 PM Title: Graduation

Still an incredible work. Can't wait for what's to come. The build-up is great !



Author's Response:

Thanks! It feels good being able to take my time on this one. Chapters won't be frequent but with that sacrifice all should be high quality.

Reviewer: Randomer000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2018 10:15 AM Title: Graduation

First time ever actually writing a review for anything on here (shame on me), but after seeing that second chapter I felt it would be a disservice not to pass on some much deserved praise, as there's not been nearly enough so far.

I really think this story is really shaping up to be something immensely special, and I can't give you enough credit for that. I also can't imagine the amount of time and effort you've put into building this story, particularly into the implement of all the 'world building' that seems to be going on (descriptions and functionality of the technology and kit that Riley has, as well as the wider society).

I've been a fan of your writing for a while, and I must say it's far more intricate and meaningful than a lot of stuff on here. You really seem to have a great grasp of how important it is to tease out the main focus (suffering/torment/scent/sweat all that stuff), whilst also never forgetting how vital it is to build up the tension to something so the payoff is really something.

Personally I'm not the biggest fan of the more maternal based foot-stuff, although I certainly can't disparage those who do, however the prospect of Riley being the focal point of the torment of Tom or others, particularly with the inclusion of size manipulation, is infinitely compelling.

Really looking forward to what's in store next, especially once Riley or size enters the main picture (maybe both at once, who knows), and full credit to you man.

Keep up the fantastic work and can't wait to see what comes next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for putting so much thought into your review! 

It's nice to write a longer story but I find it difficult somtimes knowing if I've overloaded on build up or fetish content (the latter is more of a worry in short stories), feedback like this reassures me that I'm on the right track haha. Like I've said in response to the previous, also helpful, review, I think I'll include specifications of what content shall be featured in a particular chapter so any fans of the story know what to skim and what to actually read, ensuring that all readers get the most enjoyment without actually changing the main focus of the story. Although for folks like yourself looking forward to Riley based content, there will be snippets and I intend for the ending chapters (when I eventually write them) to be based almost entirely aorund her and Tom.

Very excited to use some of the SCO kit in future chapters, so I hope you look forward to seeing it!

No idea how to properly end this response currently so Merry Christmas!

 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2018 9:31 AM Title: Graduation

Rileys's mom should play the adult and teach her that while improvising can be fun it's good HABITS that actually matter, even when it comes to shrinking...

 

Anyway, this looks promising :D



Author's Response:

Aye, perhaps Michelle can teach her daughter the kind of things that she would have missed out on at the academy, who knows? ;)

Thank you! It's nice to put a little more effort into setting things up rather than trying to reach the action quickly to try and keep readers interested. I hope I can make the pay offs worth it!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2018 5:45 PM Title: Graduation

Riley's are the most evil, I've seen it first hand.



Author's Response:

This girl definitely fits the bill, I assure you haha

Thanks for the review, hope you enjoyed what you have seen!

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