[Report This]Date: March 27 2019 2:18 PM Title: Riley's first shrinkee
I love the story so far. I love the idea of a society built around genuine foot slavery. I hope a few things happen. I hope that the enslavement techniques used by Candy J are adopted by all Shrink Officers, and Tom one day truly, unequivocally, and unabashedly falls in love with either his mother or sister's demanding soles. I also hope that we focus more on the stomping nature of these women's soles. These women have beautiful feet, smelly feet, but we also need to look at what it feels like to be cooked underneath a relentlessly stomping foot. The painful, continuous, remorseless steps and stomps as the beautiful sole above the shrinkee just steps and steps and steps and steps down upon the living-insole thousands of times per day.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear!
Actual (unwilling) foot slavery is still illegal in this society, but that doesn't mean that women with connections (for example Candy J) can't bend the rules. Not a terrible idea, not entirely sure yet what path I shall follow regarding Tom and his mom/sister when and if he gets shrunk.
Don't worry, I shall get more detailed with the experiences of shrinkees, however in this chapter I didn't want to give the shrinkee too much of a perspective. In a chapter where the main perspective belongs to the shrinkee you'll see how bad they have it.
Date: March 27 2019 8:00 AM Title: Riley's first shrinkee
First of all if I was in Tom's situation I'd look up the regulations. You'd think they'd prevent SCOs from being assigned to family members...
Author's Response:
That... is a really good idea. Not sure how Tom (or I for that matter) have never thought of that.
Also, SCOs are sometimes assigned to family members if the circumstances permit. I'll be sure to elaborate in future chapters. If the issue is that you think relatives might show too much mercy to their assigned shrinkee, remember that these women spent a year learning to be an SCO and that the Association is very thorough when reviewing such cases. But who knows, maybe Tom won't be assigned to a family member ;)
Date: March 26 2019 3:02 PM Title: Riley's first shrinkee
Wait, you're still alive? and we get to the shrinking? unbelievable! ;=)
Since extending the terms of punishment (or toying with the idea) happens to be something I love, I'll give Riley an unrequested suggestion: cut him some slack.
Plenty, actually.
And make sure that Michelle knows about it, so that when you finally strike, she'll be the one to point out how lenient you've been all those other times, and maybe she could even be the one to suggest an extension, or decide some changes in routine to prevent future misbehaviors etc.
Author's Response:
I can confirm that I am indeed still kicking :)
I like the idea of Riley easing up on her brother a bit and building herself up in the eyes of others as a saint. Will try to work it into her character. With what I have in mind, an extension might not be necessary for Tom so it'll be out of the hands of his family. Although without spoiling anything, sentence extensions will play a big part.
Thanks for yet another helpful review, glad you're continuing to follow the story!