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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2019 3:58 PM Title: Interlude - Make or break

Better than the previous interlude imho - I'm curious about the future SCOs, some part of me is rooting for Mr Locke to reunite with his mistress under his ex wife, and hopefully that is it for now.

But be careful, now you have yet more characters to handle :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! What did you prefer about this one? 

Sorry, but there is no chance of Mr Locke and his mistress being reunited so long as Patricia is in charge. She despises him and never wishes to interact with him again.

Oh I know haha, it's a little intimidating but characters from the interludes will only play minor roles in future chapters if any at all. That's how I plan to manage them anyway. The interludes are mostly there to add some extra flavour and it breaks it up a bit on my end and makes the story easier to write. 

As always, appreciate the review :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2019 2:58 PM Title: Interlude - Make or break

Always great to see this back!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Gonna try and update again soon.

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