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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2019 5:23 AM Title: Interlude - Creative cruelty

Imho the most important thing about this chapter is that Tom,Riley&Michelle need to know about it, one way or another - Riley/Michelle finds out and tells the others, Tom discovers about it and Riley/Michelle ask what he's looking at... so many possibilities!

 

(what I'm currently rooting for is that Michelle asks that if he's ever shrunken he gets some extension time with her, but 1. that's just me, and 2. "currently")



Author's Response:

Ah fuck that's good... Thankfully I haven't wrote that bit yet so I can still include it, if it fits of course :) 

If you like Michelle, I have an upcoming interlude featuring her! Not with Tom, of course. I'll let you guess who hehe.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2019 6:33 PM Title: Interlude - Creative cruelty

There's only one Riley but Naomi seems to enjoy her creative cruelty so she's always welcome.



Author's Response:

Don't you worry AdamX, we'll be returning to Riley soon enough. Happy to know that Naomi tided you over :)

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2019 12:26 PM Title: Interlude - Creative cruelty

Oh I just love these interludes! This chapter was one of my favorites! The sexual themes are the best on this site! This is why 5e slow build up is worth it, for chapters like this one! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

That's good to hear! At first I was worried that the interludes would be disliked compared to the main narrative, but the response seems great hehe. I'm enjoying expanding on the sexual themes now that story is in full swing, can't wait for you all to see what I have planned!

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