Date: January 05 2019 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2: Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Well that was interesting and a mix of emotions. I think there may have been a story similar to this years ago. "Don't Talk To Danielle" I believe it was called. I don’t wish to insinuate that you are copying that story; if you did see the incomplete story and thought to yourself: “I can think I can do a better job”, then great! My own qualm with this chapter would be that I tend not to like time skips. Perhaps there is a better way to link two or more scenes than jumping abruptly between them.
Author's Response:
Never heard of don't talk to Danielle but I'll look it up and give it a read.
The time skip thing is a bigger issue for me. I used to write every little moment of my stories but I learned it's sometimes best to break that if nothing interesting happens so I skip stuff I find irrelevant. Like do you really care how Rembarndt's doing in his math class? Those kinda questions weigh on me in balancing that. I'll to find it.