Date: April 07 2019 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 13: Juliette's return
Damn. I got mix feelings about what Juliette did. The village did have Ant and the Slayers go after her to rescue the son and they did kill her guards but it's not like the entire village was responsible.
What about the kids that had no idea what was going on or the elderly that probably couldn't hear that well. She killed innocent people indiscriminately and even felt good about it. Maybe it's just how I saw Juliette as this chivalrous woman who was probably just following her sister's orders but now she comes of as a monster. Well, at least to the humans and Slayers that is.
I'm still curious about her having regrets for her actions as the story progress. She at least may be the least cruelest out of the Daughter but I guess we'll see once we meet Florence even though her reputation gives me doubts. Great work as always.
Author's Response:
There isn't much I can say without spoilers here. I would just say that while Juliette might be "pleasant", it's not to be mistaken for good I guess. This is the last Juliette chapter for a while though so know immediate answers. It was just a side scene I decided to do before going back to the main story.
Date: April 06 2019 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 13: Juliette's return
Huh.. I dunno why but I kind of had this idea in my head after reading all of this so far that maybe Julliette would be redeemable?
Can't say i'm sure anymore.. I can't figure her out so far.
DOES she give a shit at all or is she just evil?
Author's Response:
I enjoy these types of comments because it helps to develop a character. It means that she is likable enough for people to want her to be a good person. In defense of her though, someone representing the humans killed her father, raided her mine, killing guards, and in her mind humiliated her in the eyes of her sister who she looked up to. Her size makes it unfair but the reaction might be justified. Who knows?
I wrote this whole scene in response to people saying "she seems nice" lol. Justproves that if you review, your voice can influence things to come.
Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts.