Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2019 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Visitors

I'm really enjoying everything about this story. how dominant heather is, and how she's starting to treat ben more like a pet, and disregard his feelings where they conflict with hers. I'm very curious how jason will interact with ben, too. the idea of him watching ben is very exciting. that ben's overall expected size has been reduced - and that it could be permanent - is also very inspiring. I also really like the juxtaposition of heather and jason's beliefs next to ben's, and how they seem to have more in common.

really love it. great pace, great characters!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Some of that psychology I hope to more fully flesh out. Stay tuned.