Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2019 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know if you gave seen this but it might give you some inspration.

 

https://www.deviantart.com/mshrinker/gallery/66953435/Secret-Mission

Author's Response:

Certainly I have seen that one.
His best story, imho.
A pity it stopped at the most interesting moment.

Thx for your thoughts!

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2019 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

There it is!

Good chapter. I got a little confused about which parts were flashbacks to when the city was shrunk, and which parts were in the present, but I enjoyed reading it. I like Lindsy. Also, I got to wondering, is Holli going to be a main character or was she just there to set up the story? (Not that it matters, I was just curious. But maybe I should just shut up and read on.. haha)

I like this and am eager to read more 🙂

Author's Response: Hey many thx for the review! And yes your right, that part was a bit confusing now that Im reading it again. I was a bit tired from work while editing, so I got a bit sloppy. Sorry about that. But please, don’t see yourself as a whiner. I can learn from these things. About your question, this story aint got no sprung out main character. Its not meant to have a heavy narrative or something. Just fun to write about anything that pops up. So if you have suggestions let me know. And yes, Holli will return. Thanks again for your thoughts.

Reviewer: Panzer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2019 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

This concept has a lot of potential, one of my favorite scenarios in giantess stories.  You can go a lot of different directions with this and I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with!  

Author's Response:

Hey thanks man!
More is on the way.
In fact, I'm about to post a new chapter right now!

Thanks for the kind words!


PS:
Im still most eager to see some Jessica domination ;)

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2019 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, yes.. please add more!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it!
Appreciate it.

More is coming!

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2019 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good to see new content from you, though it makes me worried a new chapter to Brobdingnagian Birthday is may not come. Still, I adore the shrunken city sceneriois and as always look forward to what you have in store. Maybe each chapter follows someone different; Holli and her basketball sized city, Addyson and her apple sized city, and the shopkeeper girl and what she does after hours. I look forward to it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

But please do not be worried about Brobdingnagian Birthday. I'm far from finished with that one. I think the storyline is about halfway now.
However, I found out that working on the same story over and over became a bit of a chore for me.
Don't get me wrong, I still enjoy writing Brobdingnagian Birthday but its nice to write something simple and fun once in a while without having to worry about plots and character development.

And yes, that is exactly my intention with this story, to focus on different perspectives like the ones you mention, but also the company's boss and the shrunken inhabitants.

More chapters are on the way, also for Brobdingnagian Birthday ;)