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Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2019 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Journey

Damn. I wish this had a good ending but I'm not sure how the hell it could  Definitely in the thriller genre. Good writing. I'm seeing and feeling the situation. None of it good. Lol



Author's Response:

lol thanks, maybe i should pick up writting thrillers haha. But i'm glad to hear you've been enjoying it

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Journey

 

This story is intriguing. It's definitely different. The woman's personality is putrid and I would guess people like her have probably suffered some kind of dramatic loss power in their childhood, and this drives them to want to be in control of others and every situation. Although I did read it could be a lack of maternal attention too that makes women "sexually dominant".

I'd love to make some fan art of it in Daz3D. With your assistance I think it'd be nice to make the woman. Do you have Discord? Real-time communication is preferable but an e-mail address may be fine if not. You can also find me on Deviantart under this username. Hopefully it's not too long for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read it. I'd love and definetly encourage fan art. I do have a discord, i'm on size haven as Cheesecake, but i don't use it very often as i used too. I hope i don't sound so stringent either but i have a direct vision of how she should look. She's kinda my overall manifestation of this fetish, so i'm a little protective. But if you feel that you can put up with me and would like to make some fan art by all means message me sometime

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Journey

es una historia buenisima,me encanta la dominacion femenina,espero con impaciencia nuevos capitulos,muchas gracias por este regalo,escribes genial



Author's Response:

Thanks, i'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story. I'm even more humbled that you think i have writting skills

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