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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2020 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 13: Glimpse

Why would he ever be disgusted or repulsed at the site between her legs.  Isn't that the greatest site on earth?

Can't wait to see her use him as her pony, if he is up for the position.



Author's Response:

Well he absolutely detests her even if she is beautiful he wants nothing to do with her

Also he is not ;P

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 13: Glimpse

OK, how can being Her pony not be his ultimate position beneath her, unless being her leashed dog is her desire?



Author's Response:

I don't think she's ever going to be settled or satisfied on one thing. Except seeing him as beneath her general

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2020 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 13: Glimpse

I think she should climb on his shoulders from the front, so that way her crotch is right against his face.

And since he can’t see with her vagina in his face, he falls over and she ends up squeezing his head between his legs.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I love ot hear when people have ideas how certain scenarios might play out with her. It's like my imagination inspires your own and vice versa.

nevertheless i love to hear and be inspired on what you guys think and possibly want. The story will always continue in the direction i think it needs to be in, but i love hearing from you all

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2020 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 13: Glimpse

To be honest I was surprised when the "ride" turned out to be something other than pony riding, now the world is balanced again.

 

And since somehow this is my first comment here: this story is A-W-E-S-O-M-E!



Author's Response:

With her i like her to be somewhat unconventional and unpredicatble as part of her nature. What you think is coming might not be at all.

Also thanks for you review, it always nice to hear people are enjoying my work even if it is their first time commenting

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