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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2019 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4: Unknown Power

Actual real world size differences are almost never written about. I commend you on doing so.

First, my critisisms. They all deal with grammatical mistakes such as misspellings and incorrect word usage. Although they are numerous, they are easily passed over by the reader as your writting style is quite clear and fluid.

Now as to your story plot, FANTASTIC! Please, continue this story, it's great.

I have a similar story about a female body builder who hates and abuses midget men; but have yet to either finish or publish it.

On a side note, have you ever seen this?

https://www.google.com/search?q=guinness+world%27s+longest+legs+and+shortest+man&tbm=isch&source=univ&client=firefox-b-1-d&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiig77T5ZThAhVIGt8KHdSHDVcQsAR6BAgIEAE&biw=1536&bih=767

Author's Response:
Hey thanks for your review, even if my reply is very tardy to say the least. Yeah me and grammer don't always get along, i probably really need to read over my work to be safe, but i'm generally to impatient and want to get stuff out as quick as possible. Your story sounds very interesting, maybe one day some of us will get to read it. but again thanks for your review, i appreciate the support

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2019 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 4: Unknown Power

Thanks for sharing. What is this unkown power I wonder? Is it a metaphor?

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2019 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Presence on the Platform

Okay, I have sent you a message on Discord. When are you likely to want to meet for a text or voice chat? The more details you can include the better. I don't mind if it takes a few sessions to her exactly how you'd want her.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed

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Date: March 11 2019 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Journey

Damn. I wish this had a good ending but I'm not sure how the hell it could Definitely in the thriller genre. Good writing. I'm seeing and feeling the situation. None of it good. Lol

Author's Response:
lol thanks, maybe i should pick up writting thrillers haha. But i'm glad to hear you've been enjoying it

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Journey

This story is intriguing. It's definitely different. The woman's personality is putrid and I would guess people like her have probably suffered some kind of dramatic loss power in their childhood, and this drives them to want to be in control of others and every situation. Although I did read it could be a lack of maternal attention too that makes women "sexually dominant".

I'd love to make some fan art of it in Daz3D. With your assistance I think it'd be nice to make the woman. Do you have Discord? Real-time communication is preferable but an e-mail address may be fine if not. You can also find me on Deviantart under this username. Hopefully it's not too long for the next chapter.

Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read it. I'd love and definetly encourage fan art. I do have a discord, i'm on size haven as Cheesecake, but i don't use it very often as i used too. I hope i don't sound so stringent either but i have a direct vision of how she should look. She's kinda my overall manifestation of this fetish, so i'm a little protective. But if you feel that you can put up with me and would like to make some fan art by all means message me sometime

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Journey

es una historia buenisima,me encanta la dominacion femenina,espero con impaciencia nuevos capitulos,muchas gracias por este regalo,escribes genial

Author's Response:
Thanks, i'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story. I'm even more humbled that you think i have writting skills

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