Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2007 12:42 PM Title: The Assignment

Well, if he and SONYA are headed for Hong Kong, maybe the lunch Jet ought to "do" is Chinese take-out (lol)!

Seriously, though: your build-up is nice and slow, which is a rarity on websites like this. Some authors like to get to the shrunken man, or gigantized woman, right away. And, half the time, without explanation!

You, though, are among the growing number of exceptions to that rule. And, I thank you for it.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. Yes, in this story I decided to defy the usual trend. I hated how most of the stories had no plot, no description, and overall no point. Oh, i almost forgot. Well......if they're going to China......why not eat Chinese once they're there? Best authentic Chinese food in the world, lol. Or, so I heard.....

                                                                                         Much joy and Chinese food,

                                                                                               Sir Lime