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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2020 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Uh oh. I actually saw this one coming. Jackie seemed afwully not concerned with the shrinking andd she pushed people away from finding out the real reason. I'm almost surprised desmond reacted as he reacted. He seems so shocked

I'm looking forward to what will happen next. Hopefully Desmond doens't flee too hard.

Thank your for writing!

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2020 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

I KNEW IT!!! :) 

Great chapter, man! My hope has been realized: Jackie is in control! 

Hopefully, after he's done cooling down and after he's talked with Maggie, he'll remember for like the 500th time that he loves being tiny for Jackie. Especially now that he knows Jackie is in control, his condition is nothing to worry about anymore! ;) 

Also, I still love how Jackie does get a little carried away in her roleplaying, but still genuinely cares about Desmond and loves him! An almost perfect girlfriend! 

Great work! Can't wait to see more! 

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