Reviews For The Underfoot Railroad
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2019 6:54 AM Title: Chapter X-17: The Coffin
Author's Response:
Date: December 13 2019 6:54 AM Title: Chapter X-17: The Coffin
I think this is one of the more interesting stories to appear on this site.
The flashbacks give it a good balance between world building and torture.
But I do have to admit that there seems no lack of that in the world building chapters.
Thank you for writing! And I'm looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Yea I think the whole idea of using the flashbacks for pacing, kind of went out the window a bit - but it just seemed to work naturally for me.
Even if they are a bit of a rollercoaster, there are should still be elements of worldbuilding in them - definitely have some stuff planned albiet i know it's not going to be anywhere near pacing lol