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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2019 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 (Giantess' POV)

Great story so far; but it would be nice if the people in the town who dug the hole and ended up at Tanya's breast would eventually be able to harvest her sweat and dead skin cells as their only, yet substainable food and water source, thus surviving off of her tit.

Hopefully Tanya shrinks other cities to adorn her breasts, perhaps even one or two between her toes or in her ass-crack.

I know I mentioned it before, but a city squnched up under one of her breasts, where her chest meets her ribs (think bra underwire) and kept in darkness breathing in stale, sweaty air.

Perhaps she could creat portholes connecting the cities, so the inhabitants could experience her different body parts?  That would be great if they all had to travel to the city / cities between her toes or in her butt crack for toejam or ass-crack filth to eat.

Keep it going.  Excited to read where this goes.



Author's Response:

Hi: Thank you for the review. Chapter 5 is foreshadowing that much of your suggestions are to come; you have great ideas with this. 

If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know. 

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