[Report This]Date: January 24 2020 7:13 PM Title: Busted
Alright. Another great chapter that pulled some of my heartstrings. I hate Barney right now, and I really hope someone torture him for what he and his lacks are doing with Paul. But, I am most angry with Sarah. I know he shrunk and technically he no longer is socially perceived as a person. But, Paul is her fucking brother for god sake! If I knew someone tied and abused my siblings the way Barney did, even if our relation might not be always good, all hell would break out.
Therefore, I can only sense some kind of sexual craving or hidden agenda in that kind of coldness. I am not talking about sadism, because even sadism revolves around trust and a otherwise safe enviroment for both - who domminates and who is domminated (yeah, I know a thing or two about psychology). I am saying she wants to have Paul down, completelly isolated and at her mercy.
I don't think Barney simply invented everything about Katelyn. There is too much detail and he wouldn't risk using Sarah's name in vain, specially if it envolved her personal time humilliating Katelyn. But I also don't think Katelyn enjoyed these events.
Paul isn't a bad person and wasn't cold towards any of his sisters. So why? I don't know why I had hopes Sarah would punish Barney for hitting Paul :( That rings the most important question in this chapter: why so much need to make Paul suffer? Why go so far as to threaten to squish him? Not even worrying about his wonds? I am really worried about this point - will he be alright?
After this chapter, I hope Sarah ends up shrinking and at the mercy of her own tinies or boyfriend, only to have Paul rescue her... ah the irony!
Sorry for any grammar mistakes. Also in a hurry today T_T
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's interesting to see you go into psychology with the characters.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2020 5:26 PM Title: Busted
Well this is sad. Now it seems as though Barney set Paul up. Sad to say, but I think Bethany may have even been in on it. Barney hated Paul because he resents him for ever being big, so he had Bethany proposition him, accused Paul of raping her, and made up that stuff about Katelyn to rile up Paul enough to get Paul to attack him. I hope Barney meets his end under the bottom of shoe.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2020 6:42 AM Title: Busted
I swear if the "report this" button had a reason code for cliffhanger abuse - i.e. well-written and thought out story with endings that leave you impatiently awaiting the next entry just to find out what happens next - well my friend, you'd be in trouble! Consider this a fair warning, unless of course you decide to update asap to appease our hunger. MOAR!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, and I'm about to upload the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 24 2020 4:37 AM Title: Busted
These last few chapters have been quite entertaining, especially after the previous ones where it was almost depressing to see Paul struggle to adapt in this tiny community.
The whole subplot with Bethany is quite refreshing. It gave Paul a little light in this dark future he is in and he also made love with a woman who seems to like him as well.
However, I don’t trust Bethany. I had my doubts, but after reading this latest chapter about Barney finding out, it had to be Bethany. I don’t think there are cameras, mics, or anyone spying on them. I think Bethany told Barney and blackmailed Paul. Maybe Barney used Bethany as a test. Something like that. Bethany probably played nice to trick Paul.
Man, the fight with Barney felt good. Even though Paul lost, I felt proud of Paul when he busted Barney’s lip. He seemed untouchable. Good to know these models could be taken down and not invincible.
That last scene is what inspired me to finally write a review again. The past few chapters just made me mad at Sarah and this whole community for how they treated Paul, but this kind of twist with Sarah is kind of interesting.
I love how Sarah picked him up while he was all tied up. Part of me thought she was going to do something sexual and my perverted mind was ready for it, haha!
However, she places him in a tiny box which basically seems like a black coffin for tiny people. We know he won’t stay in there for long because then there would be no story.
I wonder if Paul will share his side of the story or ask if Sarah had sex with Katelyn. It’s kind of messed up for Paul to learn that his sister sexually played with his companion and then Sarah then locks him up in a box. Family bonding, am I right? Lol
A few grammar mistakes here and there, and I think you may have switched a Barney in for Paul at one point. Or it was the other way around. I forgot, but there was a moment where it felt as if Paul was talking to another Paul.
Anyway, fantastic chapter and I’m excited to see where this goes. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I enjoy your analysis.