Date: January 31 2020 3:12 AM Title: A New Home
Oh, one more thing. I think a few things could happen at Brie’s.
One of the players will get injured and Jeff can’t patch him on time for a game. Then Paul gets subbed into the match and he is pulling the team down. However, someone kicks the ball and it bounces off Paul, knocking him out, but the ball goes into the goal, winning the game for Brie. After a few days, Paul wakes up and is treated like a hero.
Another possibility is Paul screws up somehow. Can’t keep up, puts red sock in washing machine, or can’t handle the open showers or something. Brie then is forced to hand Paul to his mom.
So those are my predictions
[Report This]Date: January 31 2020 3:04 AM Title: A New Home
Whoa!
I did not expect the fun at Sarah’s to be over already. Least of all, to be handed to Brie. I still prefer Sarah over Brie, so it would have been cool to see more of her punish Paul. Maybe next time.
I like the surprising care that Brie shows toward Paul. She messes with him as a big, but cares for him as a tiny. I thought she would be a nasty giantess that abuses the crap out of Paul. It’s nice that Paul gets a break and by getting a break, I mean, he is treated just like the rest of the crew.
Kyle, Jeff and the other 9 guys. Those guys seem awesome. Sounds like a bunch of college dudes. If Paul shrunk down and got handed to Brie immediately, he would complain. But since he went through Barney’s house of terror, Brie’s tiny group isn’t that bad and I think Paul is grateful for it. He doesn’t seem like he wants to get out of there or anything.
Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2020 11:40 AM Title: A New Home
Well I find it interesting. I hope you can keep it believable.
If have no problem with humiliation and his hardships, but this shrinking of Paul cannot be without problems for his family. Actions must have consequences along the way or in the end.
Can you imagine his sister telling or gets questions about selling her brother from others. Even in this kind of society, that would make you look very bad.
From Brie I expect not that she treats him the same as others. She has a history with him and I expect more curiosty from her.
I dont expect her to show it clearly, but the fact that his sister treats him that way must sometimes cross her mind of what kind of person she is dealing with.
This is what I see in to many stories, no consequences for others, only the shrinkee.
But judging from your previous writing, you probably have some interesting psychological stuff in mind and a good story. :)
[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 5:35 PM Title: A New Home
This chapter actually threw me for a loop. I thought for sure he was in for more torment at Sarah's house, but I guess she's in character down to a T, cold, unfeeling, and she never wanted him and just wants to get rid of him.
Being at Brie's house will be interesting. Something seems off already. She was pretty hyped to have him for some reason. And those two guys on her team were just hanging out at her shoe voluntarily. I have a suspicion that she uses her soccer team for something more than just sports. Like, every day she has them all partake in some massive orgy where they all service her body or something. She's hyped for having Paul becuase she gets to make him lick her armpits or feet clean or something.
Eh, I'd prefer to be there rather than with some unfeeling witch who's ready to crush me under her shoe the moment I cause a minor inconvenience lol.
Date: January 29 2020 11:13 AM Title: A New Home
Great story Benton enjoying every moment of it. Not many stories go into much details of a tinies life. I really dont like Sarah she wouldnt even give Paul a chance to explain anything while i feel he will have a better time with Brie. Thinking Paul will start working out with the team making him tougher.
Im also thinking Paul's Mom still cares for him but is just to busy with work and trying to find a way to keep him at home without affecting her or him. Guessing something will go down when Brie and Sarah have diner with their mom and she finds out what Sarah and her tinies did to Paul which will probably end badly for Sarah if Mom still cares for Paul.
Keep up the great writing cant wait for more.