Reviewer: Aberic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2020 7:46 PM Title: Team Building Exercises

Loving the story a pity its been on hiatus for the past couple of months. Hoping to see more of Brie and her new dominion over Paul, the team building exercises has to be one of my favourite chapters.

Looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work and keep safe in these hectic times.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2020 6:44 PM Title: Team Building Exercises

Surprised Paul hasn't gotten suicidal after all the shit he's been put through, and being forced to fuck his sister against his will. 

Not to mention having all his human rights stripped from him and demoted to a pet, someone's propert, I don't know how much longer his sanity can last.

Wouldn't be shocked if he threw himself off a tall structure or slit his wrists.

Sorry for the dark-ish review, but just seeing the treatment he's gotten, one can only wonder just how much longer he can endure such abuse and treatment till he finally has had enough. 

 

And the sad thing is, his sister and others probably wouldn't care (except for thos who sympathise with tinies and wish for them to have rights) it could perhaps make him a marty of sorts, or not, could just be seen as another tiny death that is insignificant in the grand scheme of things of how this world works. 

 

Reviewer: hawk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2020 2:43 PM Title: Team Building Exercises

it is very good part,, I really loved it and wonderfulll keep on