[Report This]Date: July 11 2020 7:05 PM Title: His Final Home
Great story! I love the detail and world building you do with this story. I'm kind of happy yet sad on the ending of this story and the ending of Scott. In a way, it's kind of tragic that he's stuck with a girl that obsesses over him. Idk if that's a good thing or bad, but seeing as she sold her other companions, there's probably a lot of work coming Paul's way.
I really wish there was an epiologue but from reading your blog, it looks like this is the end. Thanks Benson, you're an amazing writer!
Date: June 27 2020 2:22 AM Title: His Final Home
After reading the first few chapters again, it makes the story even sadder.... I wish Paul ended up with Hannah. But eventually Doris and Hannah would have to find out what happened right?! If not Doris which is fucked up considering she’s Paul’s mother, Hannah said he and her would meet up soon to study so she’d definitely notice something is wrong. I want to believe maybe Hannah will find out and fight to buy and take care of Paul and who knows maybe even be lovers despite their size difference. Ughhh I hate how it ended for Paul.
Date: June 25 2020 8:42 PM Title: His Final Home
Well I certainly wasn’t expecting this to ending... I was kinda hoping since you dropped that revelation that a small can become a big again that maybe it would apply to Paul but I guess not.
I’m still shocked Brie his own sister not only treated him like shit but sold him like did the last 18 years of being a big brother completely erase from her mind? Same with Sarah. I kinda don’t understand how family of all people would treat another member like an object. I don’t know if Sarah knows about this but still, she as well treated Paul poorly.
I’m also disappointed in that you made a big deal about Doris, the mom being a powerful senator wanting change yet she completely disappears after like chapter 4 or 5. Would’ve been nice to see how the progress was going. Is Doris trying her best? How did she feel going back to work about the idea that one or her kids is now a tiny. Like we didn’t see ANY of that, I was hoping the MOM of all people would at least protect him. Now we won’t know how she will react when she gets back from work and learns what Brie did.
And of course we never got to see it she won the battle for smalls rights or if she has to deal with the fact that smalls are stuck suffering.
As for Paul, I hate that he didn’t get a good ending. At the very least if he was going to be stuck as a small, the idea of ending up with Hannah would’ve made all this hell worth it at least. I’m surprised he doesn’t want to end his life as a result of the pain. Jen seems nice now but judging by how she reacted when Paul mentioned heather she seems like another Brie incoming.
I also wish we could’ve explored more of heather and Paul’s relationship, like we could’ve seen how good natured she is and stuff.
I’m surprised it ended all of a sudden, I felt like there could’ve been a lot more details to be discussed but I guess that’s just how it is, Paul is going to continue in hell until death...
Overall, it was an okay read, just needed More explanations.
Date: June 25 2020 7:05 PM Title: His Final Home
It looks like Paul might end up in a decent place since Jen seems a little obsessed with Paul granting him some liberties but that probably won't happen. Kind of wanted Paul to mature a little while staying at Brie's but that didnt happen seems he might have turned into a bigger wimp.
Pauls sister's might end up bring screwed when his Mom finds out he has been sold even if she doesnt care for him. How will it look if her tiny son is owned by another Politician while she is trying to push for tiny rights. If Doris does care for Paul his sisters will probably end up even more screwed especially if she finds out how he was treated by them and the other tinies. Wonder if Hannah would have wanted to keep Paul and treat him well. Also did Katelyn really love Paul. Guess we will never know.
Overall this was a good read that ended too soon as many people before me have said.