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Reviewer: Gtsgentle888 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Regret and Recall

Push on the button " Next". By the way are you french ?



Author's Response:

No, i'm Italian. Did my terrible grammar sell me out? ;)

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 11 2020 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: Regret and Recall

I swear, every story on here I read to fap off to, I just get too engrossed in it to get aroused. That's not a bad thing. I have wondered what the consequences for females in a universe where all the males shrank would be, but never thought about it to hard. I also like how you portray the fact that, despite an estimated forty thousand years of sapience, humans are pretty much still slaves to the estimated 600 million years of basic sexual desires, thanks to evolution. Sure, we may not like it, but, it is nigh-impossible to fight it.

Author's Response:

I'm not sure if smut that doesn't get you aroused can actually be considered a good thing but thanks anyway lol

Thanks for the thought! I'm no psychologist, but i like to imagine some "what ifs" sometimes

Reviewer: superhornet369 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2020 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Regret and Recall

This was a really good chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I just posted the conclusion of this "narrative arc", let me know what you think of it!

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