I really liked it very nice plot :D although Melissa only wore flip flops and sandals! If she wore more footwear like boots or sneakers to kill the tinys it would have been much better because you kinda get bored of the same thing :P but still awesome work!

Bravo! Not only for the informative epilogue. But, also, for the hint at a possible (nwo?) sequel.

I was sad to read about Claudia's depression. Unfortunately, not all families are real-life versions of THE BRADY BUNCH or THE WALTONS. And, more's the pity; isn't it?

Author's Response:

Yeah. I knew that the ending would be what one would call "happy", so I had to put a few downers in there to prevent it from being all flowers and bubbles.

But yeah. I plan to do a sequel (eventually; I have more planning to do with that) and a sidestory. I'm also contemplating a retelling of this story, except completely in the POV of Melissa.