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Reviewer: Drex Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2021 10:01 PM Title: Nathan's Darkest Fantasy

It's great to see you revive this one! Thank you for the content!

Reviewer: Bashou Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2020 2:30 AM Title: James: Epilogue

It's a shame ! I expected James to be trapped between Lexi's enormous georgous toes and live inside her Nikes ^^ 

Great story anyway !

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2020 1:43 AM Title: James: Epilogue

This was great Tiny! I’m unsure atm where you could go besides another chapter but new victims to the hardware/softwares glitches. I’ll think on it tho it’s 5am here lol

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2020 10:44 AM Title: James' Darkest Fantasy

Hot story!

Another chapter would be nice. Although, it doesn't have to focus on the same characters/scenarios, if you're against continuing this one.

I'm sure the company has had more than one malfunction, considering how quickly they managed to cover up this one? Maybe there was a testing phase before release that had all kinds of mishaps. 

Just throwing some ideas your way. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm not necessarily opposed to continuing James' journey, although it would more than likely be a one-off, life after the incident chapter. Rather I write another chapter or not, I will confirm, in canon, that was not the only VR tech sent out, and there was definitely a testing phase. These ideas are great, and if I end up writing, I will take them into consideration.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2020 1:01 AM Title: James' Darkest Fantasy

If you were to write another chapter, I’d love for you to expand on certain parts. Like how fate always put him back at her feet, examples of him trying to escape and ending up back underfoot or between her toes or in her shoes again. Was the suits fantasy forcing this to happen? Was he unable to be spotted by her because of the unaware setting? Like even if he was right in front of her she couldn’t notice him? If you do another these are some things I would like to see :)

Author's Response:

If I was to write another chapter, I actually really appreciate all these ideas. I have been considering writing another one, however, it all depends on if I have the time, and if I still have the muse. Getting these ideas though, they do give me something to work with.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2020 12:36 AM Title: James' Darkest Fantasy

Loved it! Excellent work!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 9:37 PM Title: James' Darkest Fantasy

Great stuff

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