Date: March 08 2024 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
So, it is at last the end ?
It makes now 5 to 6 years I follow this story !! One of my favourite !
If I could, I’d submit it for a movie adaptation, it would worth it !!
Date: October 06 2009 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
interesting turn of events! Looking forward to more Karen worshiping!
Author's Response: You're quite welcome. I'm glad to show that I've just added another episode in the continuing story. Thank you for reading and for your comments. It's nice to know that I'm not alone in this enthusiasm.
Date: June 10 2009 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
I like where this is going. Very nice job of writing.
Date: December 30 2008 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
This is a fantastic story! This is just how I think it could really happen. Will you be writing more stories like these? I love the way he has accepted being her slave- scared but thrilled by it! keep up the excellent writing
Date: December 29 2008 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
Love the story! I particularly like the whole firiend to slave/ girl to goddess transformation thing! hope you continue with some more chapters!
Date: April 14 2008 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
Uhm! Is this chapter 2-b? Or, not 2-b?
Author's Response: Ha!
rnI thought I was editing the chapter, and then I found that not only was I not permitted to edit, the engine decided that I was entering a new chapter. I've aksed Jacen Solo to fix my error.
Date: April 07 2008 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
For some reason, I picture Pamela Lee Anderson as Karen. Nice going!
Author's Response: Ha! Well, I omitted any reference to what Karen looks like. I want you to imagine an image that you want to see, rather than impose the physical image I want to see. Now, in the upcoming installment there is a slight reference, but nothing that should dash things too much for you.rnThank you for your review.